BR 2-02b: My Favorite Place

 I have a lot of favorite place, for example.. my school, my dojo, part time job's place.. but the most is my home. Do you know why I love my home? Because I can play with my dogs! I have a lot of another points! I introduce about that.

 First is my living room! Because my family always there. When I was a junior high and a high school student, I used to watch TV with my family. But now, I am not with my family so often, so I glad with my family in the living room. We enjoy watching TV and playing cards. And my young brother is an elementary student, so he is only boy when I am not there. I always thinking sorry to him. So I' d like to be with my family and I like to be with my family, that's why I like my living room!

  Next is garden. My garden has a lot of plants, herb, rose, fragrant olive.. many plants!  We often use them to cook. The taste is very good! We have a terrace in our garden. I have two dogs, small one is in house and the other big one is in the terrace. When I and my older brother were children, we used to play with them. Now, we made a terrace and my dog is there. He seemed liked it. We often play with dogs there, for example ball games. I like my garden because I can play enough with my dogs.

 Third is my room! I like my room because I can relax there. I can read, sleep, and listening music.. I can do many things there. I often make my room messy, but I'd like to keep it clean. My room's wall is white and blue, and the curtain's color is yellow. Those colors are not my favorite color, especially yellow! But I like my room. My parents bought me them. So, I like them.

  Fourth is bath room. I often take only shower because I must take two hours to take a bath. I don't have such an enough time. In fact, I would like to take a bath, but I can't. There makes me relax and feel good! I also feel that I get fatigue. I often put bath articles when I take a bath. I like them because the small is good. This is why I like bath.

I wrote some places I like, but there were few of all. And I noticed I wrote about related with my dogs. I like my dogs. I love places that lovely dogs live.

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Essay 2-02a: My Favorite Place

 I have a lot of favorite place, for example.. my school, my dojo, part time job's place.. but the most is my home. Do you know why I love my home? Because I can play with my dogs! I have a lot of another points! I introduce about that.

 First is my living and garden! Because I can be with my family in the living. When I was a junior high and a high school student, I used to watch TV with my family. But now, I am not with my family so often, so I glad with my family in the living. We enjoy watching TV and playing cards. And my young brother is an elementary student, so he is only boy when I am not there. I always thinking sorry to him. So I' d like to be with my family and I like to be with my family, that's why I like my living! And I like garden. My garden has a lot of plants, herb, rose, fragrant olive.. many plants!  We often use them to cook. The taste is very good! We have a terrace in our garden. I have two dogs, small one is in house and the other big one is in the terrace. When I and my older brother were children, we used to play with them. Now, we made a terrace and my dog is there. He seemed liked it. We often play with dogs there, for example ball games. I like my garden because I can play enough with my dogs.

 Next is my room! I like my room because I can relax there. I can read, sleep, and listening music.. I can do many things there. I often make my room messy, but I'd like to keep it clean. My room's wall is white and blue, and the cartain's color is yellow. I don't like their color, especially yellow! But I like my room. My parents bought me them. So, I like them.

 Third is bath room. I often take only shower because I must take two hours to take a bath. I don't have such an enough time. In fact, I would like to take a bath, but I can't. I love there because I can relax and feel good! I also feel that I get fatigue. I often put bath articles when I take a bath. I like them because the small is good. This is why I like bath.

 I wrote some places I like, but there were few of all. And I noticed I wrote about related with my dogs. I like my dogs. I love places that lovely dogs live.
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